by MinorMonster
I'll lend you my backpack. This poem caught my attention. Great title and the rest too.
I especially like the "virginal vector". Keep writing like this, and you'll be a force to be reckoned with. Superb!
i'm buried under all the fancy verbiage, what does it say?
there seems to be nothing here other than overly complicated language and masses of uneccesary adjectives
....comments are revealing. Poor Anonymous got lost with all the long and unfamiliar words. (Follow your own advise and read more). I know the feeling of Google places never to be visited. It's better than nothing after all.
Tess
it's not like you didn't warn them. It has google in the title. I didn't use it. I don't really think it deserves a 100. But the comments where fun to read. Glad to see someone else getting lame-ass comments. The one about the Alt. The other did have a point, but I wonder what do they like?