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by elbiscayne

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WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
Very smart rhyme

You do great job with rhyme. Very enjoyable read.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
radical

wow, great poem,

solid hard hitting with a smile

word play was great,

a roller coaster ride in words.

fun read, thanks

rev rev!

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Biography? All I have are lessons learned; usually the hard way, How would you know that it wasn't just another story in any case?