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by Icingsugar

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perksperksover 20 years ago
ya knoooooooooow

I want to love this. I love the precept, the imagery, the concept. I LOVE when you use rhyme as a tool, but when you use it in this poem as part of your structure it feels forced... "beaming?" come on...

smooth this out for me, sugah.

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