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by darkmaas

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jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Excellent poem

I missed the allusions here, and yet the poem grabbed me with its rhythm and rhyme.

"Better bring me a helping fresh

Of that warm and gently rumpled flesh."

Inspired ending...

jim :)

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