by JCSTREET
"JCSTREET gives us Stillness, which actually contains two poems - the serene 'Stillness' and the bitter-sweet wistful 'Putting In Time', two poems with quite different direction, but that works very well together."
I love your descriptions, you have a wonderful way of verbally illustrating things, but I just dont get the point ( where you are going) here...maybe I missed something? still, very nice images