All Comments on 'Stillness'

by JCSTREET

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LiarLiaralmost 20 years ago
Reviewed in the New Poems thread:

"JCSTREET gives us Stillness, which actually contains two poems - the serene 'Stillness' and the bitter-sweet wistful 'Putting In Time', two poems with quite different direction, but that works very well together."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
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I love your descriptions, you have a wonderful way of verbally illustrating things, but I just dont get the point ( where you are going) here...maybe I missed something? still, very nice images

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