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by fieryjen

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Captures well the world of the surreptitious lovers. There is one small suggestion; where you have written:

"...a thousand worde could ever"

change to:

"...a thousand words ever could"

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Short and sweet contact..

between part-time lovers... thats why God invented 'quickies'

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
desire.

Whether night or day ~ near you or far away ~ You are the one.

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