All Comments on 'Storm Bringers'

by Tawny Brown

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
storm lover

thunder rumble let it rain, I am thirsty anyway <grin>

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
good work

Welcome to Lit

~Syn

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenabout 19 years ago
So...

the storm I heard rumbling in the distance was you on the porch with your lover? <wink> Indeed this is a very nice first poem post. I especially liked your work's climactic

ending, " Not a soul within miles as we create our own storm" Thunderous applause for the new neighbor at Lit!

Vixxx

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