All Comments on 'Stranger on the Streetcar'

Thermometer set at 100 as my own personal default and does not reflect my private vote. . .

Great title!

Although the author has modified his sentence length and added breaks, this story is woefully lacking in imagery or metaphor. Two hundred more words would have allowed BobbieWallace to post this piece in Literotica as the story it is.

I hope the author considers editing this to develop the characters and setting, then resubmitting it into an appropriate story category.

I thought it was sooo hot, a great story and nice presentation. It reminded me of some of the avant-garde, beat generation material.

I read it to my two guys. They suggested we reenact it, twice of course with them taking turns as the two men in the story. The subway was packed. Oh my, oh my. That was a great evening.

Patti