by ishtat
It's written rather simply yet it's a strong write. It works.
This is more a story than a poem to my ear, but it does work. Perhaps the simplistic journalist stle with no embellishment serves to heighten the effect. - Minimalism through starkness. - I like it.
A very engaging tale, Ishtat, and that last line is wonderful!
Flyguy
My mom only had us 2 when dad was in Vietnam, but I remember moments of great lonliness (in her) and uncommon strength. Thank you for this wonderful poem.
~Syn
A great tale about fending for one's self and taking the brunt of responsibility during times of solitude.