All Comments on 'Strength Remarkable'

by ishtat

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WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
I like the way you wrote this

It's written rather simply yet it's a strong write. It works.

ReltneReltneabout 19 years ago
****

This is more a story than a poem to my ear, but it does work. Perhaps the simplistic journalist stle with no embellishment serves to heighten the effect. - Minimalism through starkness. - I like it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wonderful story

A very engaging tale, Ishtat, and that last line is wonderful!

Flyguy

duckiesmutduckiesmutabout 19 years ago
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Your poem was mentioned in today's New Poems Reviews.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
I feel this deeply

My mom only had us 2 when dad was in Vietnam, but I remember moments of great lonliness (in her) and uncommon strength. Thank you for this wonderful poem.

~Syn

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Powerful.

A great tale about fending for one's self and taking the brunt of responsibility during times of solitude.

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