All Comments on 'Submission'

Permission, submission

I'll take the latter any day;

Your writing is so hot,

that all I can say is

yes

yes

yes

yes.....until exhaustion

or being in submission? Personally, I'd have a hard time making that choice. Loved the sensuality in this.

Your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

Thanks for the journey~

If you were with me I would submit on every occasion. Oh, if only................. Jennifer, you excel each time you write. And I submit to you. When shall we met so that I can prove it?

I liked Submission very much indeed Jennifer! Another incredibly erotic sexy poem, I am becoming such a massive fan of your work, you write with such a passion, I think your amazing! Great work x