All Comments on 'Succumbing'

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IcingsugarIcingsugarover 20 years ago
Niiice...

A well written piece with a dreamy flow and direct, not too far-fetched metaphors. Also more erotic than the author seem to think. Eroticism does IMO not lie in display of skin and genitalia, and this is definitely erotic.

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