All Comments on 'Suck My Rush'

the pants unzipped. Had you finished the poem there it would have been a very good erotic poem, but as you carried it on it simply lost the flow, the energy of wanting, of desire and became just a description of mechanics. In this poem, like life sometimes, the wanting is better than the having. Think about trimming this poem and I think you will improve it a lot.

k.

k.

Now THAT is what I call a major, full blown {pardon the pun} rush!!! Your meter was impeccable - the timing of the poem - not your meat heat meter <grinnin'> and it just swept Me up and over and around and into the entire oral scene visually. HOT, HOT write! Be back in a bit - I have to go check My own heat meter now. sssssssss...

Vixxx

a wild ride on the winged words of poetry, thanks for the journey~

rush of sensual energy.