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RhymeFairyalmost 19 years agoWord Wizzard
right into my
marshmallow armor
not impenetrable,
but sticky quick sand
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I love the form and your wording.
A wonderfull picture of love.
Just loved this one~!!
Anonymousalmost 19 years agothis says it all for me:
...
no lingering notion
that i've been
sucked in far to your
black and bruised world
...
thank you, it means a lot.
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