All Comments on 'Summer Mornings'

"I'm wet" I said.

"It's raining," you replied.

And for those split seconds,

I might have loved you.

I love the feel of this poem, revealing and sentimental, but not overly so.

annaswirls

Wow, a lovely poem of

what could have been.

Wonderfully descriptive

emotions with underlying

beauty.

Thanks.

~ Jenn

...is impressive. this poem is wonderfully understated, and maturely phrased.

tense error in quotation:

"I felt too transparent," should be "I feel too transparent."

i think the last stanza could be better, less openly sentimental. and i think your line-breaking in this poem needs to be improved.

but overall, it's a wonderful effort. and i am remiss not having told you sooner that i find your work appealing.

~patrick

I love the sweetness of this poem.

Then a lil heartbreak thrown in.

I can see it as it all unfolds.

Gracefull ... heartfelt.

Good poem here~!!

hit like a hammer

~Nothing more than friends,

and nothing more than memories,

and lyrics to songs of heartbreak to remember you by. ~

That's a phrase I've lived and yet been looking for my whole life.

Excellebt job

...should definitely have a red H beside it! Waiting....

Tess