All Comments on 'Sunday Mornings Were Ours Then'

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Anonymousalmost 17 years ago

I dunno

maybe it could have beena little LONGER?

anything good youhad going for you was lost on the sheer length, not strong enough to hold my attention, not good enough to make me want to read it again. pare it some, there are parts that are not necessary to your intent here. You do have some good ideas...