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by catimann

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THIS IS NOT A SUPRISE

it is a weekend for those. TK U MLJ LV NV

HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
Reads like

Individual frames on a strip of film.

catimanncatimannover 11 years agoAuthor
Film strip

I did want the words to place pictures in the readers mind.

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 11 years ago
made me think "crap" poetry

but I'm just jaundiced.

catimanncatimannover 11 years agoAuthor
Do you mean?

Affected by or exhibiting envy? :)

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