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Click hereI want you to swallow my come,
Swallow the pleasure you give to me
To become part of your body,.your hair, your eye
So that when you look at another guy
You see him through my ecstasy
I happen to love swallowing my lovers delicious creamy cum! Just thinking of a part of him is within me all the time turns me on so much!
Orpheum69
One of the absolute best poems on here.
I come back to read it often.
Still gets me wet.
Some times people mistake length and clever twists, semantics as quality. This is clear, concise and direct.
Less is more. Perfect. After I read it, all I could say was damn.
I never thought of swallowing a man's semen in quite this way before; making a part of him become a part of me seems unutterably intimate and amazingly romantic. Thanks for that shift in worldview; I like this way of looking at things.
And only one comment?Shame. I read this and was blown away. Short and simply written, but packs an amazing punch! Swallow me so become I part of you. Those last two lines staggered me "So that when you look at another guy
You see him through my ecstasy". Damn.I won't be forgetting this one, ever. Well done!
[I'm just giving it 75 because it obviously didn't involve the effort you put into your wonderful prizewinning story.] What a sweet and charming turn in the last line! The poem seemed ordinary as it began, but when it ended it made you go "Huh...."