by Recidiva
As I said, I have no clue about poem writing, so I'm not even going to try and pick this one apart in any way. I like it better whole anyway :)
It did speak to me in a most enjoyable manner, so thank you very much. I'll be going to read your other poems now.
your passion was pen well and painted a very poetic image. Passing the time (~_~)
this poem was mentioned in the thread, "New Poems Reviews"
"And plan new ones, stacking carefree and careless with careful and wise." Great line!