All Comments on 'Sweet Torment'

Very expressive, love the build up, the anticipation. Nicely done!

bring on the rain. TK U MLJ LV NV

Hey I like tour poem and share your fantasy.

MMMMMMM very nice :)

I'd love to be able to provide this kind of pleasure to you. That's part of who I am, what I feel.

Teasing me... brings me to the edge......

While I do like the visual of lips on your legs, I don't know if I liked this. It just seemed to end to abruptly for me. But that's just my preference.

your work is amazing

Mistress, Would I be allowed to tease you?

I long to tease and be teased. To push and to be pushed to the point where you must have more. Driven by desire alone.

...is just the beginning!

tongue drawing circles,

triggering waves of sensation to your core.

Till two bodies melts.

Oh I would make you wait and wait. and beg for more... over and over to.. very nice.. like it too.. the sub side of you is very intrigueing.. love a switch though..

STG

The poem describes seduction at it's finest.

knowing for a fact this is the fist poem the woman has written in forty years, coupled with the nice near-rhyme of the last verses of each "stanza", a "4" for having attempted a poem at all after so many years eased overly easily into a "5" for the near-rhymes. unless this is "beginner's luck", the author shows potential.

Great poem, reminds me of a fantasy I have long thought about. Thanks for sharing it with us!

Very nice poem. The build up was what moved me

beautifully written. love the composition and the way you played with the words. good job keep it up.

"Brings me to the edge"

Love it.....