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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
just a little lick

"candy lovers

lolly lucky, lucked out"

oh this is a piece that will stick

like Jolly Ranchers on hard bite molars!

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
sweets

I must agree, the final lines are the best of the poem.

"a lingering kiss electric

candy till it makes us

candy lovers

lolly lucky, lucked out"

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