by My Erotic Tale
and I wasn't sure how to comment. There are parts of it that I like. I'm just now sure I feel about the poem as a whole. I'm still thinking about it. :)
evil or angelic? depends on how it is said and from whose mouth it is uttered. I like the sentiments here, the rhyme turned me off, but the beauty of the poem is its observation and I will forgive rhyme for truth any day :) enjoyed reading this one
~~ maria
Don't make something out of everything. Enjoy the words. Be capable to read and enjoy the poem for the beauty. Don't give it a deeper meaning.
Great work...
~L