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WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
I read this earlier

and I wasn't sure how to comment. There are parts of it that I like. I'm just now sure I feel about the poem as a whole. I'm still thinking about it. :)

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Words...

of wisdom is what this piece offers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
what is a word

evil or angelic? depends on how it is said and from whose mouth it is uttered. I like the sentiments here, the rhyme turned me off, but the beauty of the poem is its observation and I will forgive rhyme for truth any day :) enjoyed reading this one

~~ maria

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Read it for the truth in the words

Don't make something out of everything. Enjoy the words. Be capable to read and enjoy the poem for the beauty. Don't give it a deeper meaning.

Great work...

~L

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uabout 19 years ago
powerful... moving...

very poignant!

kisses,

T ;)

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