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Click here the ocean pulled
like taffy
its salt stretched
on moon fingers
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Angelineover 16 years agoJust beautiful!
It's a poem that's big and small at the same time. The image is lovely, the diction is just right, and the title invests the poem with even more meaning.
Your poem has been reviewed in the New Poems review thread on the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read. :)
