All Comments on 'Talking in Your Sleep'

Very expressive, very interesting concepts played with. Love it! Keep up the good work!

in near night time twilight

I hear your words you speak

remembering time after times

when someone spoke to me

as you are speaking now

and in my sleep I would hear

the words she whispered in my ear

only to wonder later on

if I had imagined them

or did they exist only

in sweet teary dreams

This is my new favourite poem. You truly have a poet's heart.

Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poems thread on the Literotica Poetry Forum:

http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=16338591#post16338591

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thank you for this refreshing piece of writing..loved it!!

Beautiful and poignant :-)