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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Another 30/30 piece today ~

I like the metaphor, it works so well;

Reminds me of a candle with a wick too long ~

Not being trimmed, it falls onto the wax,

Wrecking even more, exposing still more wick and in its passion, all becomes undone.

recklesschildrecklesschildover 17 years ago
Scented patchouli oils

My friend, I only realized that while I've been enjoying your poems, I haven't taken the time to publically declare how wonderful they are.

I declare they (and you) are most wonderful. I think your form poems are amazing...and that is a most unbiased comment.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
sweet burn out.

A love too hot ~ not to cool down. Another SET exquisite rendering.

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