All Comments on 'Tasting Flesh'

i mentioned this poem in the new poem review thread in the poetry forum - wildsweetone

You've dropped the familiar and push out and grow. Congrats on that. I read this over several times today and while there is some question in my mind about structure, my biggest real concern is in those first two lines — they feel like they'd work better as three lines. Go ahead and play with the rest to your heart's content.

I really liked the use of the word whipple... (Psychoanalysis. a mental process by which unpleasant or painful ideas are abolished from the mind.)this twist at the start had me reading more. I found the form breaks uncomfortable at some places as well as some overused cliques but overall this has a ton of potential! Your erotic writes are always "breathless" leaving one wanting more. thank you for the read

du lac

whipple def. is wrong lol.. that is what I get for looking it up on the web!!! but over all I still like the word and how it rolls in your mouth lol..

du lac

this is an exuberant poem, RF!

I mean it!!, busy and visual. I loved it. and it kinda reminds me of one I eeeked out--- It's not what you know, by normal jean

keep up the good work!!

xoxo

maria