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The joy of submission,

of tasting delights

from an upturned bowl,

placed over the mouth ~

and you are such a pleasure to read...

"Can I drink you,

swallow you whole?

Taste you

outside in".

WOW !

My fav line,

"Taste you outside in"..

and again and again... mmmm.

delicious thoughts, and most

vivid images .. You have AWED me !

sGp

for winks and thrills...bluerains

The thing that struck me most about this poem is the intimacy it achieves with just a few well chosen words. i.e. 'Single digits dip one by one'

Well done RF.

If all my dreams were like this, I'd never wake up.

Sure beats apple juice for breakfast!!!