by swallowedscream
i mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along to the Poetry Forum and join in with other poets. - wildsweetone (the 50% rating is so that it does not affect future temp ratings).
A critique looking for a critque. Clever poet :) I enjoyed your word choices, but mostly fell in love with your subject matter. Keep on challenging your peers. It's how we all get better, yes?
You have a gift and you're sharing it with all of us, thank you.