All Comments on 'thank you for the new boots'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Now here's a chick

With unresolved

Issues.

sacksackover 17 years ago
a bit chaotic...

images come and go....it might have been better to more fully integrate "Daniel", whoever that is into the body of the poem. Not sure about the stanza about a boy's (??) feelings toward his mother. Seems to take away from the rant about the father, or at best distracts from it. Less successful than your other purposefully vague poems.

MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailover 17 years ago
Just

the way I like 'em

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