All Comments on 'That High Light'

interesting read, thanks

interesting read, thanks

I like your style, but at times I wonder if your thesaurus has become more important than your poetic sensibility. To my ear some of your modifiers clash with each other. - But this is still a poem well worth reading.

intersesting style ..and content uplifting ..the use of high light gives me a soft sigh...nicely done..welcome to lit. hope to read much more of your world...ty /bluerains

This poem offers a beautiful promise in its metaphor. I can feel the birth and rebirth, the breaking open of a timeless, eternal life. There is a melancholy, almost a bittersweet feeling to it, too. Lovely.