All Comments on 'The Birthday Letters'

A very smooth read, just sort of bubbles along and presents image after image. It works really well because you explore very small details. I'm not sure about "Dairy": that was the only word that threw me, but maybe I have to reread it, Overall, it's just excellent writing. Thanks for the read. :-)

in my pocket. They are nice words, and feel comfortable there. :-)

Much to think about in this imagery-laden nontraditional sounding Valentine.

Im so sorry! I haved tabbed browsing and am very inept at using it, and was trying to do two poems at once so I wouldn't lose my train of thought. please disregard the last line of my comment, it went elsewhere...actually, it didnt and thats the problem :D

Excellent poem. The whole thing is very visual yet cerebral. i loved it!

and yes, raindrops on shoes was the clincher ;)

What a fantastic poem! It has been mentioned on the new poems review thread.