All Comments on 'The BJ'

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
Porn verse

5ed, anyway

tip/ lip

quiver/shiver

hips/ lips.

are all way too expected, thereby no excitement, at least avoids the worst

oneiriaoneiriaabout 11 years ago
Yummy

Very effective and unstrained use of language.

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
The Gift of Fellatio

How can a man not enjoy the poetic brilliance of such an intimate act..... Thanks for sharing your talents...

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