All Comments on 'The Book of Flowers. Poem:3'

by prince myshkin

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
panties

I really liked the feel of instructions in this poem. Very intimate, close. I would recommend you consider your punctuation, a few places they might not be necessary.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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well done ~ and just a thought ~

men's briefs and boxers - utilitarian,

but women's panties ~ a mystic aura...

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