All Comments on 'The Breath of Regret'

Keep looking for that silver lining ~ it's out there ... somewhere...

regrets keep us traveling on the wheel of life...I forget...anyway ..always a silver lining ...to find it is a gift..nice pen...blue

Dressed in white

On white sheets she lay

We sent for the priest

But she sent him away

She’d had enough

And let us know

Of everyone else’s way

She had her own way to go

She left in a breath

We said “good for her!”

While we acted out of love

We see how sorry we were

Start submitting your work to ezines/magazines if you haven't already. It's time! You're good!

and i've seen a cathartic release in many of your poems. i may have mentioned that you should submit to zines. in any case keep it up. strong write here.....don

is clearly hindsights forgivness..... I've missed you curious, and came back for some 'wordplay'. Once again your depth portrays the soul within... sGp