All Comments on 'The British Pantry'

almost as good as a bacon sandwich

and that is very high praise, being as good as bacon! You have lovely metaphors, comparisons, you wove them together thoughtfully and without boring, overused words. Totally enjoyable, good work :)

Excellent. One could quibble about the odd word here and there but the atmospherics are excellent. Nostalgic but unsentimental. However, I think the poem is strong enough that the last line could be dropped altogether. To me the whole poem has already made that point - but I'm probably wrong. 5.

So nice to see a fresh take on a love poem - avoiding trite cliche.

Lovely picture.

The evil in me (which cannot be denied) wants to whisper "Hovis Ad"