All Comments on 'The Dark Side of the Moon'

oh this is romantic without sappy... I love it-- and the moments of pause with your shorter lines as statements...and the gravity...nice write-- look forward to more as

very nice poem, thanks for the read.

You might want to explore the poem format more often...a good release for your fertile imagination!

Very nice indeed, from the heart with a smattering of soul.

the problem with poems in general is that they are sad attempts at stories by those who believe they are being witty.

I think I like this poem the best.

The sad thing about negative commenters. Is that often they are nothing but sad, mean-spirited & cowardly people who think they are astute. Ignore that nasty commenter. Your poetry is wonderful!