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The Fingers of Maya

byoneiria©

Ripples on the lake

tear the moon apart.

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by Tristesse208/01/13

This....

...is my second try at leaving a comment but it's worth returning to say thus is near to perfection - the title, the simplicity, even the lay-out. 5 but it's not enough.

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by Angeline08/01/13

Wonderful

you have such skill with this. The words are perfect but so is the balance and the shape.

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by todski2808/01/13

Ok

With the simplest of lines you always seem to create breathtaking moments I love it.

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