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Tristesse2 favorited this poem!
...is my second try at leaving a comment but it's worth returning to say thus is near to perfection - the title, the simplicity, even the lay-out. 5 but it's not enough.
you have such skill with this. The words are perfect but so is the balance and the shape.
With the simplest of lines you always seem to create breathtaking moments I love it.
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