All Comments on 'The first Snow fall'

deligthfully enriching~

wow annora shines with new found poetry

fabuliptous~ hehehe

snow angel was endearing...dareing and touching in

the revelation of the season and mystique of annora's

erotic nature! wonderful~

drawn into the wistful poetic nature of a snow angel

witty and clever write L~

I just loved the picture you painted for us. The snow,..the window..the snow angel(of course, loved it)..You show us what it is to see that first snow. The wonderment and excitement. Just a wonderful picture and feeling.

Your poem is a mixture of humor and wonder that is quite moving. I enjoyed this!!

What a beautiful flow of words, and how expressive. You have a way with words.

Oh, I went back in time:)

This was indeed, a beautiful read. Nice flow, very detailed taking the reader with you. I think I would've done something different with that line about the cheeks. Also, with more punctuation in this piece, it would've been even better. Thanks for sharing. I very much enjoyed:)

Feeling somehow part of this

I find myself falling back

landing ever so lightly

Swinging my arms and legs

I make a snow angel- I have lost count:)

The cold is bittersweet

I stand up running towards my door

Once back inside I strip down

and stand by the fireplace.- rub those cheeks!