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All Comments on 'The Gatekeeper'

by CeriseNoire

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WickedEveWickedEveabout 17 years ago
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I like how you describe your gatekeeper as if she's just another working girl. Great description of her in the first strophe.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 17 years ago
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I liked this on a lot till the last line. It, the last line, felt a bit cliched, especially compared to the rest of the poem.

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