All Comments on 'The Gift'

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dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 20 years ago
i like the flow.....

of this poem. there is a tightness here that i really like. and the ending explains the whole piece. but i've never heard of a poet's name calle rodrick...but hey...why not be creative with it. nice read all the way through.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
jumps

This stanza really jumps out:

My gift to you,

A sweet paper doll

Who thinks she is torn,

But still floats

With the wind.

That's good.

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