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dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
interesting twist...

and i tend to think that rhyme isn't what you were after here, but the two go nicely together. i dig that ending:

The girl with the ego Lego

walked on, bag of fragments

rattling at her hip. No wiser,

nothing built.

nice piece......don

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Interesting concept & construct

You do know that "ego" anf "Lego" do not rhyme, don't you??

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