The Hollow Woman

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Cloth covers the cavity
Once home to a beating force
Now hollow

Held upright by a steelwork frame
Frankenstein's latest creation
The woman without a heart

Light that once shined so clear
Now sickly dim and sullen
Pains the metal form

The muddy yellow rays
Seep from tattered dress's seams
Still moist from the grave's cold soil

She lifts her hands to cover it
And bows her head in shame
What happened here, she wonders

When last she slept she knew herself
To awaken now in this horror of a tower
A stranger to the mirror

The good doctor pats her cold shoulder
And congratulates them both
Awash in the glory of creation

Tears do not fall from her too dry eyes
But the ache remains
Ghost pains, Frankenstein easily explains

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Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoover 13 years ago
Yeah

It's kinda kewl, but I had to read it a few times. Ghost pains remain, even without a heart. Gotcha.

vrosej10vrosej10over 13 years ago
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I can't figure out whether this is a tale or a metaphor but it's well written.

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