All Comments on 'The Maxine Poems - 3'

There's a nice mix in

this piece which is what

makes it so effectice.

I enjoyed the read.

Thanks.

~ JC

Your poem was mentioned in today's reviews.

So well writ;

what woman could resist

such an act of devotion;

tho if it were me,

I'd resist the song,

lest I undo all else I had done...

I liked all of it, but especially:

And let me,

Finally,

Deeply,

Painstakingly,

Touch you.

Hold you.

Open you.

Encircle you.