All Comments on 'the meaning of its'

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 13 years ago
*

what?

oh the hell with it, I like surprises

easy 5

AngelineAngelineover 13 years ago
Made me smile

and if you write one about the misuse of "loose" for "lose" you will be my hero!

One suggestion: I think some of your poems are coming up double-spaced because you are cutting and pasting them into the submission form. Maybe not, but that happens to mine sometimes and if you aren't checking when you submit you'll get a unintentional double-spacer. (Just tryin to help. :-) )

theognistheognisover 13 years agoAuthor
Angeline

The spacing monster got me again. Submitting edited version:

its is like his, or like her

and though you might wonder

no, it's not a blunder

but it would be if

you're thinking

it is

Thanks, and thanks to twelveoone, also.

vrosej10vrosej10over 13 years ago
Huh?

Don't quite get it, but that might be me.

PepperPacePepperPaceabout 13 years ago
Why?

Why does there have to be so many meanings behind three simple letters? Thanks for pointing it out in such an ingenious way. Loved it!

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyabout 13 years ago
nice little lesson

I think it should be "hers" in L1

theognistheognisabout 13 years agoAuthor
Thank you, EroticOrogeny

I originally thought it should be 'hers' also; in fact I wrote it that way. After thinking about it, I realized it should 'her.' Replace 'its' in a sentence with 'her' and you will see.

Examples: He saw its eyes. He saw her eyes.

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyabout 13 years ago
both "her" and "hers" OK

"The eyes are its, those eyes are hers."

All depends upon context.

theognistheognisabout 13 years agoAuthor
Yes

But it rhymes better with 'her.'

softsmilesoftsmileabout 13 years ago
morning smiles!

This one has me smiling as I sip my coffee! Such a playful way of saying it's and its are not the same. *happy sigh*

theognistheognisabout 13 years agoAuthor

Thanks, softsmile. Pep, too, and everyone else who liked the poem. Much appreciated.

JadedAndyJadedAndyalmost 13 years ago
Kncejma;.

Everything that seeps through your fingertips is brilliant. Enough said.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THINKING WOULD BE THE BLUNDER

IF "ITS" POSSIBLE,, tk u mlj lv nv

theognistheognisover 11 years agoAuthor
EroticOrogeny

I've decided you're right. Edited version submitted.

theognistheognisover 11 years agoAuthor
Emery

Thank you.

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