by steve porter
There is something about the liquid attraction of water that is eternal.
told. A simple and elegant poem
Mentioned in today's new poem reviews
Simply Gorgeous imagery and to me, the metaphor is deeply profound.
expressed so well...I read that page a couple years back..wonderful article...you make it flow like a stream...blue
There is no "memory of water" that we can be like and so the "sentimental" characterization. Sentiment is fine, even tear-jerky sentiment is fine. What makes something sentimental is the falsehood behind the idea.
This is not meant as an attack, just a comment on how some readers will react to such "images".