by Toward A Word
..is so, so funny! Really well-written....and I was waiting, ignoring the chalk equations, for you to open your shy mouth! Drown the past....screw algebra...pull up in your Jaguar now, and I'm gone....dump the shrew.....it's destiny motor man....are you going to foul up yet again?
It's every bad lifestyle commersial clich? rolled into one uge gazonkah of a message, turbo charged and put on fire. Great fun to read. You're a good poet, but I'm really in awe of when you combine that with your sharp humor.
Think you should be in advertizing, luv.
Awesome stuff. Kisses.