All Comments on 'The night they first met'

I really liked this one.

Yours was the only one I guessed right in the challenge.

You captured the moment very well and brought forth wonderful passionate images.

Your rhyme was perfect, not a flaw in my opinion, i loved it, and i read this over and over :)

Wow this was just lovely.

I enjoyed it very much.

You captured the essence of their emotions and play... was really quite perfect. Very, very nice!

I don't read much poetry but I have to start now. I'm glad I did this is really good and I'm gald I did. Thanks for this one!

Because not many people can get away with using rhyme and maintaining the gentle romance that this poem has. Beautifully done, Tarakin.

loved it Tarakin... just beautiful.

Beautiful rhyme. Much passion. The best I've read so far.