All Comments on 'The Onliners'

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 20 years ago
This stanza

this fetching mom

most men would cherish

watched her children thrive

as her love perished

is the best. Seems a little bit of a downer. Maybe you're right, though. I enjoy my time online, but then I am here for the poetry!

sandspikesandspikeabout 20 years ago
Get on get out...

You have listed it all and did it quickly, I like

this one.

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