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All Comments on 'The Palm of your hand'

by Desejo

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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasurealmost 13 years ago
Agreed......

...beautiful, with feeling.

Tess + 5

greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 13 years ago

Very effective use of repetition; sensual; nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
*****

Extraordinary. No, more than that.

Five.

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