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by Lauren Hynde

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LinderellaLinderellaover 18 years ago
Lovely

You speak from the heart and it is treasured.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
This is...

This is good poetry and you are to be applauded for attempting such a difficult challenge as I failed miserably!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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A fascinating read,

evocative of Poe

and his pendulum's blade

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
as the fire

burns away the lower being...the blade carves what is left into the nexus..well said...bluerains

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