All Comments on 'The Pleasure Doll'

by FluteMaster

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TzaraTzaraabout 12 years ago
I rather liked this.

It's not the easiest thing to do to write a BDSM poem, let alone a formal, rhymed one. Pretty good job.

Mentioned on the New Poetry Recommendations thread in the Poetry Feedback and Discussion thread.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
But....

A good poem, but I'd have to worry about someone who actually does this stuff....

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
sally

Have you listened to be my girl sally by the police.

this poem reminds me of it

FluteMasterFluteMasterover 11 years agoAuthor
Re Sally

I love the Police, but I'd missed this one...interesting connection.

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